i understood the previous one of the weight shift, hitting ball on the descent, and keeping your head back, this one however is a bunch of sharp lines.
i rate it a 1 for golf training purposes.
It's a date. ;-) Two numbers and a slash.
Yours gets a 7. Would like to see a straighter trail leg without the knee kicked in so much, the hips pushed more forward, and the spine's inclination maintained a little better. But good HDR-like effect.