I'm probably not the one to ask, but the things I see are:
good straight left arm
looks like right arm is folding a little prematurely on the backswing.
you could more than likely have more control by shortening the backswing a little (not necessary to get parallel at the top unless you can maintain control). Keep elbows more in to the torso.
your arms are in front of the body through most of the swing which is good. (as opposed to getting "stuck" behind the body).
I thought I saw a little "twitch" at the top of the swing where the plane changed a few degrees
coming down, club face was fairly open, but looked as though you got it pretty square at impact.
all in all, from my untrained eye, a decent looking swing.