My Swing (nickolasjt)

Overall swing looks good, would be great to see a face one.  I would tend to disagree with the bolded part, would recommend checking on this thread.  To me it looks like the weight is sitting too far back into your heels.  Can cause some path issues.

Will be bending over less with the hips and "slumping" more with the upper back.  Almost feel like you could balance a glass of water on your neck at address.  Shoulders will be rounded inwards.  Will allow you to see the ball out of the center of your eyes and simply the pivot.   All having the "chin up" does is make the shoulders turn too flat which moves your head around.  Stay centered and you can actually increase the amount you turn because you "free up" other parts of your body.  Something you need to do, especially in the lower body.  Looks like your hips slide to the right on the backswing, causing the arms to lift and causing some sequence issues.

No problem, get a face-on view if you can.

Yeah gets a little "shallow to steep".  Address is much better though.

I think part of why the club head gets inside the hands on the takeaway is due to the arms at set-up.  They, especially the left arm, is too bent at address.  So I would try to keep the body alignments the same but have the arms handing more "in front" of you rather than to your side.  Feel like the top of the left arm, part closest to the arm pit, is on top of the left pec rather than to the left of the pec.

So the shaft gets steep on the downswing and to compensate you roll the left foot forward to "make room".  Long term this might be something I look at improving to avoid injury with your lower back, ankle and left knee.

Pic below, left foot planted as the players transfers their weight forward.  Can now use the ground to "push" off of to extend their legs, raise their belt buckle and take the tension or flexion out of his lower back.

I think changing the positions of the arms at set-up will help the way the club loads on the backswing.  Not saying it will fix the entire thing but it's kind of the first step IMO.

Here's your top of backswing, looks really good to me, just looking at this position by itself there's nothing to "fix".  I also think you can play decent golf, looks like you have some speed, being "shallow to steep".  I think if you want to keep improving and tighten up your ballstriking the pieces I mentioned are worth looking at.

Going to put a video together for you today or tomorrow to explain further.

No just saying that it look like you produce some decent speed.  Means that you can "get away" with going a little "shallow to steep".