I've been Playing Golf for: Last July
My current handicap index or average score is: 27,9
My typical ball flight is: quite fast
The shot I hate or the "miss" I'm trying to reduce/eliminate is: slice over 2 neighboring holes
It is nice that you are able to get the club back to the ball..
I think for you to get some good feedback you should take a look at making sure you tape from the right angles. This should help.
Then you should move on to understand the 5 commonalities between all good golfers at.
I look forward to seeing more, and welcome to the member swing thread!
Turn both feet out at address so the hips and shoulders can turn "steeper". The pivot is too level and that's part of why you see the club swing back so far on the backswing. So rather than have an "armsy" swing that leads to slices, focus more on the pivot, how the body is moving.
Good stuff for you to watch and implement