Trying to get a deeper hip turn and more hip turn in backswing and wanted to see if anyone has thoughts with where I am at currently. This is 1 among other things I am working on but whittling away at this move at the moment. If anyone sees something else glaringly obvious that is awry please don't be shy. Also, if the video below is bad quality in anyway e.g. bad angle, not clear enough, etc., please let me know.