I love that ben hogan video- it should help get you on the right track. For someone who's only been playing the game 6 months I'd say you're looking good- I wish I could get some of my hack friends to dedicate half the time you are to getting better. Other then what you've already noticed (hands getting stuck in the first video) you just need a few minor fixes. If there's one thing watching professional golf can teach you on tv in 2012 is there are very few perfect swings anymore, as long as you're on plane at contact you can get away with some mistakes in your swing. Don't get too caught up on thinking so much shot to shot. Go out there choke down on the driver half an inch- it will give you more control and you'll hit more fairways. Most important thing to do when you play is keep your own scorecard- track you're fairways hit, greens hit, and putts made. That will give you an idea of what to practice more to lower your score, oh and keep us posted.