I think this goes to show that any written materials on golf will only get you so far. Unfortunately, we need to pay the $$ to have an instructor match his or her instruction to our particular swing, and explain in detail what that instruction actually means. It's like trying to find an article to cure a shank. The cure will work, if you know which of the multitude of possible reasons is actually causing you in particular to shank. And even advice as simple as "you're swinging out to in" is only an observation of the final direct cause. The initial cause might be a weak left hand grip, which causes an overly straightened wrist at setup, which makes you shift your weight too far over your toes at address, . . . and on and on.