wow ^^ that is amazing. Yeah, the bend towards the ball is what I am trying to get rid of. That is how I naturally stand up to the ball and I have to make a conscious effort to fix that. On my pictures, the white line crosses the red line, and on trevor's, it never does. I think this is what I am going for.
As for the lower body movement, I have had some serious issues with getting my weight on my right side and hitting the ball far. For reference my distances about 6 months ago: 7 iron 150 4 iron 180.
today, it is more like 7 iron 165, and 4 iron 195. I got a tip from a v. good player who told me to "get my knee behind thet ball" (by the way he is a friend of Mr. Immelman's). I pretty much instantly got a bunch of yardage and a lot of that movement might be me trying to exagerrate that move.