My Swing (mikebish13)

[mikebish13]

I've been Playing Golf for: seriously for around 3/4 months (I've had one lesson) but before that I'd play a round every 2/3 years
My current handicap index or average score is: I shot 100 in my last round
My typical ball flight is: Fairly low but generally quite straight (tend to slice wildly with driver and hybrid when trying to 'go for it')
The shot I hate or the "miss" I'm trying to reduce/eliminate is: an inconsistent strike of the ball with my irons, every 2/5 shots is a fat or thin

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[biodarwin]

I believe there are 2 things you should fix before any other items.

1.) Increase your shoulder angle in your backswing.  Notice your swing plane and shoulder angles are off at the top of the swing.

2.)  You are too much outside inside on your swing.  Keeping your right elbow close to the body on the downswing will help with this.  Also, it looks like in the first video, you start real outside, this also caused your left arm to be at a different angle that your club head, which makes it very hard to square up at impact.