My Swing (dai3015) [S&T]

Thanks for your comments & observations on my swing last week.
I tried to take it on board & reading the board, what seemed to make most sense was to try a form of stack and tilt.
I've had the dvd's & book for a little while but haven't really delved into them as I thought the swing was a little "quirky"! Anyway, seeing how appaling my own swing was I decided that I couldn't care what it looked like as long as I could get it to work with some form of consistency.
So, this evening I've had a bit of a bash to see if I could make any of it work.
I know I'm not doing it correctly & I still see a weight shift to my right during the backswing, but I can immediately see an improved (for me!!) impact position and a little bit of lag.
Can you have a look and give me some pointers to work on or even tell me to drop it as I'm nowhere near! I'm sorry but I don't really understand TGM speak, so accumulators, etc don't mean a lot to me - if you could give it to me in plain English if possible, it would be much appreciated and easier for me to understand.
Many thanks

Looks pretty good to me, for what that's worth. Maybe try to feel a little more weight on the left leg going back and shorten the backswing a bit. Impact looks pretty solid and you're moving forward nicely.

But come on man, sit down and go through the damn book! It's an easy read.

Amazing how rarely the actual ballflight gets discussed in these threads. I guess we just want pretty looking swings?