I've been Playing Golf for: 14 years
My current handicap index or average score is: 5.6
My typical ball flight is: HIGH
The shot I hate or the "miss" I'm trying to reduce/eliminate is: in between draw/hook
A couple of things: Either you are Spider Man and that is the most severe sidehill lie ever ... or your video came out sideways. It's kind of hard to watch.
Secondly, it's better if you "embed" the video instead of just posting the link (all you have to do is click on the little film icon at the top of the dialog bog and paste it in there), that way we can watch it right here.
Lastly, the instructors will all tell you that they don't like giving tips to people based off of practice swings.
(From what I can tell, your swing looks nice though :))