The top picture is the after and the bottom is the before. And while it's a small difference (2 days between), it speaks to me. I am clearly coming out of posture in the bottom and on top it's more like my lower body is engaged into the shot and my energy seems directional. Plus I can see my back left cheek on top and the bottom is more of a straightening than a turn.
my second session of working on flattening my plane. I don't know why but now that I look back on it I see that my stance is significantly more open and I don't know why I let that happen. I was hitting more of a fade pattern rather than the draw I was seeing the previous session. It's definitely progress and I don't see my huge loss of posture when trying to compensate for my poor actions.
Just keep grinding.